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| My fantasy novels have many characters and that means romantic relationships do arise, especially when people have to go to war and face death. In Judgment Rising, the third novel of The Rys Chronicles, the teenage girl Lydea enters the Wilderness with her mother and brother who are seeking the healing magic of the rys. She meets Tytido a warrior of the Hirqua Tribe who won wealth and glory in the war against Onja. |
Tytido
assisted Lydea onto her horse. She was not dressed for riding, and he enjoyed
how her skirt pulled up past her knees when she sat in the saddle. Her delicate
leg wear represented a feminine treasure next to the smooth saddle leather. The
sight of her silk stockings from some fancy shop in distant Atrophane rewarded
him with an unexpected rush of confident excitement.
Instead
of taking the High Road around the south rim, as when people normally traveled
to Elendra, Tytido headed up the north loop of the road. This route was little
traveled and turf still spread over the ancient stones of the road. In places,
erosion had dragged the hills over the road, and they had to ride over the
rough ground. Despite the centuries of neglect, the original surface that had been
carved from the land remained for the most part, and the ghostly outline of the
road wound up the mountainside.
“Is
it safe to be out here?” Lydea asked after the settlement receded from view and
only empty wilds surrounded her. “I have been told about the fen, the fentha—”
“Fenthakrabi,” Tytido said. “Do you not think
that you are safe with me?”
“Well,”
she hesitated, trying to be generous. “I heard that the beast can kill many men
at once.”
Becoming
more serious, Tytido conceded that they were very dangerous. “But it is a
forest creature. One has never been seen on the High Road.”
“Then,
I shall insist that we not go into the forest,” Lydea said.
“No,
we will not,” Tytido agreed. “I would not go into the forest without some
warriors. It is a wild place, even to us.” Tytido then related his smaller
excursion into the forest on his way to Elendra in which he had seen a
fenthakrabi fight a mother bear.
“Oh,
I think Vetanium is enough of the Wilderness for me,” Lydea said.
Her
comment bothered Tytido and he quickly tried to alter her opinion. “Nufal is a
beautiful place, and once a great rys civilization occupied this valley. Humans
lived here as well. Come, just a little farther and you will see.”
They
had been riding around the mountain to the north of Vetanium, gradually gaining
elevation, and Tytido knew they would soon reach a point that overlooked the
valley.
Tytido
hurried up the road and Lydea urged her horse to follow. She gasped when her
horse faltered, and he immediately looked back with concern. The horse was
fine, but Lydea had been frightened when it stumbled.
Straightening
herself, she patted the horse’s neck. A little embarrassed, she said, “I do not
ride as well as you. I am really a city girl.”
Despite
her claims of urban ineptitude, Tytido admired her perseverance. In his eyes,
she did not look foreign to the land. Her hazel eyes matched the sun-dried
plains that unfolded in the vista behind her.
“You
came across the Wilderness, Lydea. I am sure you can handle one short trip up a
road,” Tytido encouraged.
“You
know, Tytido, calling this a road takes some imagination,” she commented.
“In
Nufal, this counts as quite a good road,” he insisted.
They
ascended a steep switchback and emerged on a ledge. Lydea exclaimed with
delight as she saw the panoramic view. Below her, a dense forest filled the
oval valley. Mountains ringed the forest like proud family members gathered
around a newborn’s crib. Lesser peaks attended the broad snow-capped mountains
that dominated the hazy distances to the north, east, and south. But the
massive ruins rising from the forest impressed Lydea the most. She had not
guessed that the Tabren
Mountains concealed the
architecture of such an advanced society. The temple jutting from the canopy
was higher than the largest building in Cros, and, for the first time, the
mysteries of the Wilderness truly excited Lydea. Atrophane was not the greatest
realm that had ever been.
Tytido
dismounted and held her horse’s bridle while she got down.
“It
is amazing,” she breathed, and Tytido was delighted to see the wonder in her
eyes.
Walking
her to the edge of the road, he said, “The city you see in the forest has by
far the largest ruins, but there are ruined cities all the way around the
valley, like Vetanium. This road connects them all.” He swept his hand in a
circle to indicate the locations of the other cities.
Eagerly,
she began to scan the valley and he continued, “We know of five ruined cities,
not including the forest city. There is Vetanium and the second settlement of
Elendra. To the south, on the prairie, is an old town, and far back in the
mountains is what we call the Secret
City.” Remembering the
chilling scream from the canyon, he added his belief that Tempet and Alloi had
come from the Secret
City.
Pointing
to the north rim, he continued, “And there, almost directly overlooking the
forest city, is the fifth ruin.”
“I
think I see something,” Lydea said. “Some broken walls maybe.”
“I
know it does not look like much at this distance,” Tytido apologized, wishing
that a grand, shining city lorded over the valley. Stepping close behind Lydea,
he put a hand on her shoulder. “That is where my settlement will be. All the
surrounding lands will be my estates. I plan to build a new city and call it Lydeaem.” He punctuated
his statement by kissing her neck and sliding his other hand around her hip and
down into the crease above her thigh.
Lydea
inhaled sharply and looked over her shoulder, drawn by his browsing lips.
Tytido felt her tense in his arms, but it was a good tension created by the
sudden injection of affection. As her head turned, he switched from nuzzling
her ear to kissing her cheek. Quickly, he arrived at her lips, turned her body,
and embraced her fully.
Their
kiss deepened, and mutual desires flared, swiftly increasing in intensity.
Lydea wrangled with temptation as pleasure enticed her body toward freedom. The
power of her feelings startled her and she attempted to retreat. Pulling away
from Tytido, she tried to locate her rational mind. Even as she groped for
control, the lingering energy of his touches and kisses beckoned her to return.
Tytido
resisted his urge to simply pull her back to his hungry lips. He believed that
she wanted him, but he accepted that he had to let her reach that conclusion
for herself. Her virginal uncertainty was endearing to him as well, and he
relished how much his advances had flustered her.
With
the breeze cooling her wet lips, Lydea avoided eye contact and said, “Why do
you want to name your settlement Lydeaem?”
Tytido
said, “That is how to use your language to name the city after you, right?”
“Yes,
it is correct, but, but why?” Lydea asked again although she could guess at his
reasons.
“Because
I want you to come live there with me—as my wife,” he answered.
“Wife?”
she repeated sharply and took a step back.
Her
reaction wounded him and revived hurt feelings from a previous attempt to
marry. Before the war with Onja, he had been betrothed to a woman from his
tribe. As was typical among the Hirqua, it had been an arranged match, but he had
looked forward to his marriage after winning wealth and glory in the war. But
when his betrothed had learned of his intention to move to the Wilderness, she
had refused to marry him. Her family had agreed with her, and Tytido had been
obligated to accept the refund of his brideprice. He had left his homeland as a
single and humiliated man.
That
rejection had burned deeply into his pride, but time had healed the pain.
Eventually, he was glad that the Hirqua woman was not with him.
“I
know the Wilderness can be a difficult place for a woman to live,” he said,
attempting to reason with her fears. “But we can live better than I do now. I
will have a big house built for you, and you can have as many servants as you
want.” He restrained himself from moving closer to her in his excitement.
“Lydea, you will be a noblewoman, ruling class. I am wealthy. I offer you life
at the top of society.”
Lydea
blinked hard. The strong breeze tugged strands of her golden hair in
conflicting directions.
“Tytido,” she murmured. Searching for words, she
studied the man whose kind attention made him more attractive with each passing
day. Confronted by his passions and desire for commitment all at once, she
could not think straight. Only desire and fear stimulated her mind. Tytido stood
before her, a handsome strong man. Any woman could potentially find him
appealing. He had charmed her as he struggled through his shyness, but she had
noticed the intensity that lurked inside him. As he sparred that morning, she
had seen him strike with fierce speed. He was a warrior, a killer. Alone on the
mountainside, he could make her do anything.
Judgment Rising picks up the epic begun in the first two books of The Rys Chronicles, but readers can jump in at this point in the saga too. Judgment Rising introduces a new story line and some new characters.
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